Two is better than one

This last week we worked on reviwing eachothers essays and might I say im glad we did! Things I normally wouldn't have taken notice of in my paper others were able to point out. It was very effective. We had either 4 or 5 per group. We sat together in a circle and rotated eachothers papers and pointed out our "wishes" and "kisses". Being able to help others and recieve help from others just came to show how much we can improve in life overall with the help of others. We miss many things in life due to this lack of notice, but having someone else help out can make the difference. Thank you group for the awesome critique and compliment. =)